As it stands now, I think this logo is wonderful and would certainly stand on its own and achieve recognition. The design of the face almost emerging from the artistic shape really speaks of the creativity behind the design.
Most of the logo has lines that flow well, however there are a few things that jump out at me here, and almost seem to conflict with the overall design. First the seemingly random ending to the shapes at the rear. It seems just a little chaotic.
The two bottom shapes that are broken apart at the middle... I find myself wondering more 'what was the artist intending" here than appreciating how it adds to the logo.
I think you're well on your way to yet another fantastic logo...but I think maybe there is still some consideration and revision to be done.
I'm not sure what I'd do differently to tell you the truth, but it just seems in my mind to go from elegance in the front to chaotic in the back.
Again, fantastic design, and I love the idea.
Firstval , i really appreciate your support and encouraging
Yeah, your opinnion has been taken into account !
belive me , i wasn't even thinking to chose a face shap as a logo , my primary idea is to make a colorful logo , and i said i must reach my idea and make a logo with multycolors , yes the first time i was wondering , how it can be done ?? i really was confused & not sure ,,, but evry things comes with an idea !
again !! thank you very much !